James K Baxter Poem

In L3 writing ( Level 3 ) we are learning to write poems. we were inspired by James K Baxter. He is and incredible writer. his first album was shared when he was 17. For our structure we used his first sentence and last one, then we had to come up with 5 nouns and then 5-7 verbs. Once I finished I felt like I was beginning to get better at poems because I managed to write a poem similar two James's.  Here is my version of This Town.

This Town